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Strange Stuff

 

I’m always on the lookout in the news for interesting bits
for our next novel. This week lots of strange stuff showed up on my radar –
most of it would be unbelievable in a work of fiction. Still maybe we’ll find
some way to use it.
 

In Tulsa, OK – woman survives being trapped in a home
freezer for 4 days. Details are a little hazy over how she got in there. Police
reports say foul play is not suspected. Most surprising to me is that she had
that much extra room in her freezer. I know if I buy two gallons of ice cream
at the same time, the frozen peas have to be tossed to make space.
 

In Rockhill, SC – ex-boyfriend found living in woman’s
attic. And this was twelve years after they broke up. When he got out of prison,
he looked her up. Or rather down – he was sneaking looks at her through the
heating vents. Apparently he just moved into the crawlspace, making a human
nest amongst her winter coats. She heard noises but thought she had
“poltergeist stuff going on” in her house. 
Moral of the story – when things go bump in the night, don’t call a
psychic – call an exterminator. Works equally well for both cockroaches and
ex-boyfriends.
 

I don’t know what to say about it – some people just have
too much spare time on their hands. Pretending to be Bigfoot could get you some
attention – I’ll give him that. But pretending to be Bigfoot (although dressed
in a camouflaged costume) and standing in the middle of the highway traffic
means you’re just not playing with enough marbles. Usually that would be enough
of a story – but the reporter goes on to hint at a conspiracy. Maybe someone
paid this idiot in an attempt to get a pseudo- reality television show to film
in their community. See, you really couldn’t use this stuff as a plot in a novel
– readers would never buy it.
 
What’s the strangest story you’ve heard lately? Got any that you think would make a good mystery plot?
 
Rhonda
aka The Southern Half of Evelyn David
 
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The Search for Plots

Where do mystery plots come from? National news broadcasts, local newspapers, obscure blogs – they are all great resources for a mystery writer.

The following are some of the news bits that caught my eye recently.

A searcher dies: Robert Rines died at age 87. For 35 years he’d been spending his free time at Loch Ness looking for evidence of Nessie. As a biologist in addition to being a mystery writer, I’ve always been interested in the search for unknown species. I think Mr. Rines must have enjoyed the adventure and the thrill of the search; otherwise he would have give up the hunt years ago. Many books have been written with the theme of “the searcher.” And many more will be.

A celebrity crashes his SUV: An expensive SUV driven by a sports celebrity strikes a fire hydrant and tree at the end of his driveway in the middle of the night. The air bags don’t deploy. His wife uses a golf club to shatter the back windows and pulls her semiconscious husband out. Or at least that’s the surface story. The next day reports of affairs fill the tabloid and mainstream news sources. Then the celebrity apologies for letting his family down and pulls out of scheduled events. Wouldn’t be hard to pen a plot with this scenario.

A couple crashes a White House State Dinner: Had Evelyn David included an event like that in a mystery, readers would have howled, claiming it was unbelievable. Now we all know different. All the Secret Service agents, metal detectors and firepower in the world is sometimes not as effective as one strategically placed secretary with a guest list on a clipboard. The couple’s totally inappropriate, even dangerous, actions have opened up all kinds of plot opportunities for writers who want to use the backdrop of the White House.

A murder trial in Italy: The American student studying in Italy is on trial for the murder of her housemate, a British student. An innocent, young American woman who is being mistreated by a foreign justice system? Or is she a monster who masterminded a sexual assault and bloody killing of another young woman? The jury just found her guilty and sentenced her to 26 years in prison. There’s tons of material for a fictional mystery in this sad set of circumstances.

What kinds of non-fictional mysteries are you interested in? Which ones would you like to see used as the basis of a novel? Or do you tire of the ripped-straight-from-the-headlines, Law and Order type of scenarios and would rather not recognize the events when you read a mystery book? Is it cheating to base the story on real life and simply manipulate the ending you prefer? Or is all fair and game in the mystery biz?

Rhonda aka The Southern Half of Evelyn David

Mystery Plots

A priest hanging from a bunch of helium-filled balloons disappears. A caller reporting child abuse at a polygamist compound can’t be found. A mail carrier catches a baby who falls from a second story window. The daily news is a great source of “plot bunnies” for mystery writers. It’s just a matter of choosing a subject that will hold your and your readers’ interest for 100,000 words.

With the advent of 24-hour cable news and the Internet, today’s writers have access to an endless stream of interesting stories and events. Unsolved murders, missing persons, haunted houses, treacherous weather, family feuds, dangerous jobs, and unexplained events are wonderful building blocks for your next mystery novel. Many writers keep a notebook filled with plot ideas; others, like me, file the information away in memory for future use.

It’s time for “Evelyn David” to start a new book. Since there are two writers involved we not only have lots of plot ideas, but have to negotiate with each other to narrow the choices. Sometimes one of us will take an idea and run with it, writing a few pages to see if we can truly turn the idea into a viable storyline. I have at least five such partial stories parked on my desktop – everything from a sequel to our short story, I Try Not To Drive Past Cemeteries, to a children’s story involving Jesse James loot, to a couple who run an antique store and solve murders in their spare time. From time to time I write a little more on each, depending on my mood. I’m not sure any will ever make it to a publisher’s desk, but maybe.

How to start? I bring up a blank sheet of paper on my computer screen. I type a working title. Then save the blank page. (Note: it’s always wise to save your work every half page or so. I haven’t lost any work yet to a power surge and I don’t intend to – bowing my head and offering a silent prayer.)

It’s usually best to start in the middle of the action – the scream of the baby falling, the ring of the anonymous call, the man hanging from the balloons drifting out of sight. You want to start with the “good stuff” then back up and describe your setting and your characters. Some people work off of an outline. My co-author and I don’t – or at least we don’t have a hard and fast one. Later in the writing, as the subplots develop and begin to take on a life of their own, we start structuring the chapters and the scenes.

We keep a running list of character names, descriptions, occupations, etc. – all the details you don’t want to forget (i.e. your hero drives a Ford Bronco on page 20 and suddenly leaps into a Chevy Tahoe on page 187.)

As I mentioned earlier, it’s time for Evelyn David to start a new book.

The sticky tabs on the diaper held. Twenty pounds of screaming baby dropping two stories at the speed of gravity. Only fragments of seconds to act. Reaching up, my fingers found purchase between the leg opening and the waistband. Pampers were tough. And on sale at the local super center. Strange the thoughts that run through your mind at times like these.

Dead silence. The baby and I looked at each other in amazement. My heart felt like it was going to explode; I couldn’t seem to take a deep breath.

The baby had no such problem. The noise was deafening.

I got a better grip. The sudden moisture on my hands had me checking the baby for injuries. There were none.

The diaper was strong—but not leak proof.

Okay, not great. But it’s a start. Maybe I need to watch CNN for more ideas.

Good luck with your own writing!

Evelyn David