Post-Publication
/in Uncategorized/by Bethany MainesI just love writing and I would never bother anyone to buy my books. In fact, I prefer not to talk to people at
all. I’ll just stay in my writing cave
over here and type some more.
BUY MY BOOKS!!! REVIEW MY BOOKS!!! I
NEED A STREET CORNER AND A BULLHORN STAT!
WHY DON’T YOU LOVE MEEEEEEEEE!!
post-publishing sentiment, but they don’t.
Not a bit. Publishing a book, or presenting any piece of artwork for
public consumption, is to lay bare some piece of the soul in a very public
way. It’s very difficult to maintain any
sort of equilibrium as reviews from readers trickle in. Some of the reviews can be wonderful and have
you floating high in the sky and others have you raging and stomping around the
house. But even the angry-makers are a
validation of a kind. Someone read my
book and cared enough to leave a review!
Yes, they thought my main character was snarky, but they cared enough to
comment, damn it! The worst is
silence. You, you invisible people, you
bought the book! I know you did. It’s right there in the sales report. You didn’t read it? You read it, but didn’t love it? Why don’t you love meeeeeee?
from the computer and go for a walk. Or
talk to the dog. And Kato says that it’s
time for a walk, so off I go.
From the City of Destiny, San Juan
Islands Mysteries, Shark Santoyo
Crime Series, and numerous short stories. When she’s not traveling to
exotic lands, or kicking some serious butt with her fourth degree black belt in
karate, she can be found chasing her daughter or glued to the computer working
on her next novel. You can also catch up with her on YouTube,
Twitter and Facebook.
How Much is Too Much? The Art of Subtly –by T.K. Thorne
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Writer, humanist,
dog-mom, horse servant and cat-slave,
Lover of solitude
and the company of good friends,
New places, new ideas
and old wisdom.
much information” is one of the tenets of “good” fiction writing, i.e., writing
that avoids the slush pile. A positive way to phrase this is—write subtly.
Lakeman, author of The First Five Pages:
A Writer’s Guide to Staying Out of the Rejection Pile:
feel—inflated with superfluous words, phrases, dialogue, and scenes that are
far too long.
unsaid; be a minimalist.
alienate him/her.
information.
much is too much and how do you know when to stop? For some people, that skill
comes naturally, but others struggle with it. Recently, I was reading over my
latest novel manuscript and decided I wanted to drop some back story in the
first chapter of book three of a trilogy. Backstory is always risky because too
much can pull the reader out of the story world. They “hear” the author
“filling them in.”
to a homicide scene where a construction worker has fallen seven stories to his
death. She looks at the body and hopes she isn’t going to get sick.
I inserted:
“The only time I’ve been sick at the sight of a dead body was the night I had
my first vision, a glimpse of the future that made me fire two bullets into a
man’s back.”
Why?
It’s a natural thought proceeding from her hope that she won’t get sick.
leaves the reader with questions—Why did she shoot a man in the back? Why
wasn’t she fired or convicted of murder?
that Rose had a traumatic incident in her past and that bodies don’t usually
make her nauseous. Important stuff.
thought instead: “This reminds me of the time when I had a few drinks with
Harry and got sick all over the floor.”
question of how many words you use. This version also flows from her thinking
about getting sick, but it is too much information, because–who cares if she got
sick drinking with Henry? It is not important to the story and adds nothing to
the plot or character development. Unless it is an important part of her
character that her mind wanders willy-nilly, it pulls the reader out of the
story narrative.
all three of these things, but if you have a suspicious piece of writing,
analyze it to make sure it is (1) relevant and in context, (2) leaves questions
open, and/or (3) adds to the plot and character.
historical novels, NOAH’S WIFE and ANGELS AT THE GATE, filling in the untold
backstories of extraordinary unnamed women—the wives of Noah and Lot—in two of
the world’s most famous sagas. The New
York Post’s “Books You Should Be Reading” list featured her first
non-fiction book, LAST CHANCE FOR JUSTICE, which details the investigators’
behind-the-scenes stories of the 1963 Birmingham church bombing case. Her next
project is HOUSE OF ROSE, the first of a trilogy in the paranormal-crime genre.
She loves traveling and speaking about her books and life lessons. T.K. writes
at her mountaintop home near Birmingham, Alabama, often with two dogs and a cat
vying for her lap. She blogs about “What Moves Me” on her website, TKThorne.com. Join her private newsletter email list and
receive a two free short stories at “TK’s Korner.”
In It For The Money
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In It For The Money releases next week. After several related-world novellas, it was fun to climb back into Holly’s head–and heart.
This latest addition to the Holly Price Mystery Series definitely plays to my tag line–Mystery with a Financial Twist; Trust issues, Family Bonds. A CPA and amateur sleuth, Holly gets drawn into both her family’s and clients’ crises. In these stories, she usually has to figure out “why-dun-it” in addition to “who-dun-it?”
The books in the series combine mystery, a touch of humor, and a chunk of relationship issues that generate some interesting emails. (Note, JC is an imaginary character, but I love that you love him.)
Holly Price traded her professional goals for personal plans when she agreed to leave her high-flying position with the Seattle Mergers and Acquisitions team and take over the family accounting practice. Reunited with JC Dimitrak, her former fiancé, she’s already questioning whether she’s ready to flip her condo for marriage and a house in the ‘burbs.
When her cousin Tate needs investors for his innovative truck suspension, Holly works her business matchmaking skills and connects him with a client. The rockcrawler showcasing the new part crashes at its debut event, however, and the driver dies. Framed for the sabotage, Tate turns to Holly when the local cops—including JC—are ready to haul him to jail. Holly soon finds her cousin and client embroiled in multiple criminal schemes. She’s drawn into the investigation, a position that threatens her life, her family and her already shaky relationship with JC.
To celebrate the release of In It For the Money, book 1 of the series – So About the Money is on sale for only 99 cents! Enjoy the romp across Washington state!
When Holly Price trips over a friend’s dead body while hiking, her life takes a nosedive into a world of intrigue and danger. The verdict is murder—and Holly is the prime suspect. Of course, the fact that the sexy—and very pissed off—cop threatening to arrest her is JC Dimitrak, Holly’s jilted ex-fiancé, doesn’t help matters.
To protect her future, her business…and her heart…the intrepid forensic accountant must use all her considerable investigative skills to follow the money through an intricate web of shadow companies, while staying one step ahead of her ex-fiancé. She better solve the case before the real killer decides CPA stands for Certified Pain in the Ass…and the next dead body found beside the river is Holly’s.
An award-winning author of financial mysteries, Cathy Perkins writes twisting dark suspense and light amateur sleuth stories. When not writing, she battles with the beavers over the pond height or heads out on another travel adventure. She lives in Washington with her husband, children, several dogs and the resident deer herd.
Visit her at http://cperkinswrites.com or on Facebook
Sign up for her new release announcement newsletter in either place.
She’s hard at work on the next book in the Holly Price series.
May the Force Be with Me!
/in Uncategorized/by Kay Kendallby Kay Kendall
Right now I need all the help I can get. So today I called down The
Force to help amp up my super powers. In my case, The Force is Bob Dylan.
Let me explain.
My second mystery published almost three years ago. Like the first one, it
took its name from a Bob Dylan song title. I use Dylan to evoke the late 1960s when the
stories take place. In 2013 came my first mystery in the Austin Starr series,
DESOLATION ROW (see concert shirt at right). In 2015 came RAINY DAY WOMEN. And
then came a lengthy hiatus.
Now, at long, long last my marvelous editor and I are getting my third
mystery ready for publication. Maybe you think I’ve been lazing around the
house and doing nothing. Nope. Not exactly. Chez Kendall got hit by three
major illnesses in a row. First my husband fought cancer. Then I did, and then
I developed a rare bone disease from a botched dental procedure.
My third book got written along the way, but it took a super long time. As I
contemplate the work still to be done, my supply of oomph feels drained. The
revision I face on this continuation of the Austin Starr mystery saga seems
taxing. That’s why I call on Mr. Dylan to lend me some of his special sauce—just
a pinch of his enormous creativity, pretty please—to prepare me for the arduous
journey ahead.
Heck, I may need to wear this Dylan tee shirt every day for the next month.
Well, if so, it will be worth it. I look forward to bringing my third
mystery, AFTER YOU’VE GONE, to its publication date, later this year.
This third mystery is a prequel featuring Austin Starr’s Texas grandmother.
And wouldn’t you know it, she too loves to solve puzzles. In 1923, inspired by
her emersion in the Sherlock Holmes stories of her era, she chases down the
murderer of a relative when everyone else believes a peculiarly awful death was
merely an accident. She runs into rumrunners, bootleggers, gangsters, and
genuine flappers—even floozies. Headquarters for this activity in Texas during Prohibition
was the wild city of Galveston on the gulf coast. Al Capone even sent his goons
down from Chicago to try to muscle in on the action. Suffice it to say, Austin’s
grandmother has many eye-opening experiences.
Of course, Dylan wasn’t writing songs 100 years ago so I use another
song title instead, one that stands the test of time. Popular in the Roaring
Twenties when this prequel is set, the song “After You’ve Gone” has
been covered by many famous singers every decade since. I especially recommend
the versions by Ella Fitzgerald and Fiona Apple. Find them on YouTube.
And then, some months from now when Stairway Press publishes my new mystery,
I hope you will read it—and then conclude that some things are worth waiting
for. Just please do wish me luck in the meantime.
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Kay Kendall is a long-time fan of
historical novels and now writes mysteries that capture the spirit and
turbulence of the sixties. A reformed PR executive who won international awards
for her projects, Kay lives in Texas with her Canadian husband, three house
rabbits, and spaniel Wills. Terribly allergic to her bunnies, she loves them
anyway! Her book titles show she’s a Bob Dylan buff. In 2015 Rainy Day
Women won two Silver Falchion Awards at Killer Nashville.
Visit Kay at her website < http://www.austinstarr.com/>
or on Facebook < https://www.facebook.com/KayKendallAuthor>
Checking Out Some Great “How To” Writing Guidelines
/in Uncategorized/by Paula BensonGail Benson
I’ve been coming across a number of online articles that express succinctly how
certain forms of genre fiction should be written. Here are a few I’ve
discovered:
Palumbo wrote “Taking the Mystery Out of How
to Write a Mystery” (https://www.writersstore.com/taking-the-mystery-out-of-writing-mysteries/).
He lists three important elements: : “1) establishing the unique character of
the protagonist, 2) making narrative use of the world in which the story takes
place, and 3) planting clues (remember, only a few) that derive from the
particular aspects of that world.” Palumbo recommends that writers consider
what makes them unique and their own backgrounds in developing their
protagonists and settings.
Wendig provides “25 Things Writers Should Know About Creating Mystery” (http://terribleminds.com/ramble/2012/05/08/25-things-writers-should-know-about-creating-mystery/).
He describes a mystery as an incomplete equation. Even though readers know the
answer will be revealed by the end, “[a] good story traps us in the moment and
compels us by its incompleteness.” Readers want to be part of the process. “[S]ometimes
creating mystery is not an act of asking a question but the deed of providing a
clearly incorrect answer. Let the audience seek the truth by showing them a
lie.” And, it’s important for plot and character to be intricately intertwined.
“Plot, after all, is like Soylent Green — it’s made of people.”
Her article is written about mystery novels, but the suggestions are easily
adapted to short stories. She points out that people read mysteries for a “particular
experience.” They want the opportunity to solve the crime and they expect all
to turn out well in the end. Reading many mysteries to see how “the rules” have
been applied in those stories will be helpful to a writer, and understanding “the
rules” in order to better meet reader expectations will help a writer craft a
better mystery story. Among her recommendations are to introduce the detective,
culprit, and crime early and wait until the last possible moment to reveal the
culprit.
Derk explains the “The 8
Keys to a Good Heist Story” (https://litreactor.com/columns/the-8-keys-to-a-good-heist-story).
“A good heist has a planning stage, execution stage, and an escape. They can be
in different proportions, but if your story is missing one of the three, it
won’t pass muster.” Derk says there must be complications and a reason to root
for success. Also, he suggests taking care in putting the team together and
having a reason behind the operation that is greater than monetary gain.
David Lewis Anderson gives a good description of “Time Travel in Science
Fiction” (http://andersoninstitute.com/time-travel-in-science-fiction.html).
He offers a historical analysis of science fiction stories that have used time
travel, but he also explores the elements writers have developed through those
stories.
Sustaining Suspense,” (http://www.writersdigest.com/online-editor/6-secrets-to-creating-and-sustaining-suspense)
Steven James evaluates how to add suspense in mystery,
thriller, and literary stories. He suggests the key is to give readers
something to worry about, then explains how to do that.
Jan Ellison offers “9 Practical Tricks for Writing
Your First Novel” (http://www.writersdigest.com/online-editor/9-practical-tricks-for-writing-your-first-novel).
Two of her recommendations that I found interesting were to set writing goals
that are completely within your control and keep working on a poem while
writing your novel. The poem allows you freedom of expression and provides a way
to get started with your writing.
Have you read any
writing “how to” articles lately?
Finding Your Writers Tribe
/in Uncategorized/by The Stiletto GangMy friend Dianne Freeman visits the blog today. We met through a miracle called Authors 18, an online group of writers who are all debuting novels in 2018. I’m so pleased she’s here to talk about finding, or sometimes making, your own writers tribe. –Shari Randall
Women Empowering Women by Juliana Aragón Fatula
/in Uncategorized/by The Stiletto GangWomen Empowering Women Writing Workshops
this link will open to forty-nine photos and quotes on writing.
background, setting the mood for my characters. My writing style comes from
playwriting and screenwriting and poetry. I see my characters in my head on a
movie set and hear the soundtrack playing. So many great mysteries have been made
into movies that began as great books.
to Rickie Lee Jones sing about Chuck E’s in Love. Since most of my leading
characters are strong women, I listen to the great voices like: Tina Turner,
Joni Mitchell, Linda Ronstadt, Minnie Ripperton, Janis Joplin,
and the incredible Chavela Vargas. If you’ve never heard these women’s voices
or heard of them, give them a listen.
revision process. First, I write the story. Next, I polish and edit the story.
I have worked on my m.s. since 2011! I also spent much of those years reading my
favorite mystery writers, studying master writers and reading their “How to
Write a Mystery” books.
by master writers. When I reflect on how long I’ve been working on this m.s. I
realize, first I studied, researched, learned how to write a mystery, and I realize
I’ve just completed a master’s degree in mystery writing and completed my first
mystery m.s.! Whew! All while maintaining my daily responsibility of being
wife, mother, and teaching Bridging Borders young ladies writing workshops.
Whew! I’m tired. No wonder I’ve taken seven years to finish my book!
Antonio, Salt Lake City, and Las Cruces. I’ve worked with writers who have Ph.Ds.
and teach writing at universities, and with writers who are starting to find
their voice and writing for the first time. I fall somewhere in between.
Sometimes I feel intimidated by writers with Ph.Ds. but then mi esposo tells
me, “Who’s a big girl and wears big girl panties and published two books? Who?
You, that’s who.” We laugh, and I realize I’m a life long learner and have been
studying my entire life. At sixty-one, that’s a lot of reading books, taking
notes, and teaching my students what I’ve learned. My son says, “Mom, you
should have a Ph.D. by now. You’ve been studying and going to college all of my
life.” Well, son, I’m proud to announce I’ve decided I have an honorary Ph.D.
in life.
to light the path for the next generation of young women writers. I’m proud. I’m
not only writing books, I’m creating new writers who will pay it forward etc.
life but, today my life is frickin’ fantastic. I love what I do. When I hand
one of my books to these young ladies and tell them my story they realize I was
them and I survived. I made my life meaningful and they can do the same.
could relate to me, I realize I’ve been successful and my heart soars! If I
help just one child to feel hopeful, I have my goal in life, but I know from
feedback that I’ve helped dozens of young women and young men to dream of a
better life.
was the KKK headquarters in the early 20’s can find her voice, if a young writer
of color can tell her story and get it published, anything is possible. The
moon, the sun, the stars. My riches are these young ladies’ faces, not dollar
signs, but I’m richer than I’ve ever imagined I could be. I am loved, respected
and that’s why I keep writing, studying, researching, mastering my craft, so I
can be a master writer, so I can write not a good book, but a great book!
special relationship. I taught her in seventh grade Language Arts and teatro
and now I’m mentoring her as a twenty-one-year-old adult. I’m blessed; I’m
blessed; I’m blessed and couldn’t be happier to have the good and bad experiences
in my life. They made me who I am. And I’ve discovered my purpose in life. It’s
not be a housewife, ha. It’s to mentor young women and pass on the skills I’ve
acquired on this road called life.
mentees, I will be able to say, “I studied and learned how to write. I taught
myself from the greatest writers how to write a great novel. I can be proud and
share my tools of the trade with them and in that way pay it forward.
have stories to tell and I share them with my unique voice. I write the book,
only I can write. I create art. If I wasn’t meant to be a storyteller, why do I
have gifts like: imagination, creativity, soulful, spiritual gifts from the Cosmos?
To waste my gifts would be sinful.
myself, “Juliana, you are exceptional, you can do anything you set your mind to
do. You can help others who struggle with family dysfunction, alcoholism, drug
addiction, incarceration, suicide, mental illness, sexual assault and abuse because
you’ve survived all these trials in life and come out a much better person.”
Denise Chavez, my Mother, Louise Mondragon Aragon, Dolores Alarcon, Emma
Medina, Irene Aragon, Lynette Aragon, Aimee Medina Carr, Tracy Harmon, Judy Noel,
Eva Balerio, Maria Melendez Kelson, Corinne Espinoza, Crissy Red, Lois Red-Elk,
Debra Gallegos, Yolanda Ortega and my teachers too many to mention but
especially Mrs. Durbin my seventh-grade language arts teacher who instilled in
me a love of words, of books, of writing. So many wonderful women have helped create
me and now I continue the mission statement: Women Empowering Women, mujeres
muy mujeres!
Against the Undertow
/in Uncategorized/by Bethany Mainesby Bethany Maines
It’s release day for Against the Undertow! I’m so excited to bring this book out into the world. The San Juan Island Murder Mystery Series is a little like Matlock went to the beach. It features a cantankerous ex-CIA agent, Tobias Yearly, and his granddaughter, Tish, as they solve mysteries from their home on Orcas Island in Washington State. It’s funny, it’s romantic and it’s full of twists and turns. This semi-cozy series has been a joy to research (mmm… food research) and write (I <3 my characters) and I hope that all of you enjoy it as much as I have.
You never know what will drag you down.
Former actress Tish Yearly is determined to turn an old Orcas Island homestead into the premier wedding venue in the San Juans Islands of Washington, but money, skill and her grandfather, Tobias Yearly, are all standing in her way. Tobias, the septuagenarian ex-CIA agent, wants them to become private investigators. Tish might be able to ignore her grandfather’s whims, except that her one time love interest and current friend, handsome Sheriff’s Deputy Emmett Nash, was just accused of murdering his ex-wife’s boyfriend. Now Tish and Tobias are on the case, and it should be easy—after all, who could really think Nash was a killer?—but the further they investigate, the more people seem to be threatening her life: the police detective on the case, Nash’s angry ex-wife, his psychotic ex-girlfriend, and a strangely venomous group of hippies. Almost everyone on the island seems determined to stop her. Tish is swimming against the undertow, but it might not be enough to save either Nash or herself.
And this month you can also pick book 1 – An Unseen Current – for ¢.99.
You never know what’s beneath the surface.
When Seattle native Tish Yearly finds herself fired and evicted all in one afternoon, she knows she’s in deep water. Unemployed and desperate, the 26 year old ex-actress heads for the one place she knows she’ll be welcome – the house of her cantankerous ex-CIA agent grandfather, Tobias Yearly, in the San Juan Islands. And when she discovers the strangled corpse of Tobias’s best friend, she knows she’s in over her head. Tish is thrown head-long into a mystery that pits her against a handsome but straight-laced Sheriff’s Deputy, a group of eccentric and clannish local residents, and a killer who knows the island far better than she does. Now Tish must swim against the current, depending on her nearly forgotten acting skills and her grandfather’s spy craft, to con a killer and keep them alive.
Bethany
Maines is the author of the Carrie Mae Mystery Series, Tales From the City of Destiny, San Juan Islands Mysteries, Shark Santoyo Crime Series, and numerous
short stories. When she’s not traveling to exotic lands, or kicking some
serious butt with her fourth degree black belt in karate, she can be found
chasing her daughter or glued to the computer working on her next novel. You
can also catch up with her on YouTube,
Twitter and Facebook.
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/in Uncategorized/by ABPlumBy AB Plum