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Cry Uncle

By Evelyn David

It’s not that I’m so smart, it’s just that I stay with problems longer.

~ Albert Einstein
Age wrinkles the body. Quitting wrinkles the soul.

~ Douglas MacArthur

Character consists of what you do on the third and fourth

~ James A. Michener

A professional writer is an amateur who didn’t quit.

~ Richard Bach

If you’re going through hell, keep going.
~ Winston Churchill

If you’re looking for a quote that says it’s okay to quit –
you won’t find one. I know. I was searching for somebody smart or famous, maybe
not Paris Hilton or Kim Kardashian, but any minor celebrity would do, that
would justify our decision to abandon a book that we’d been writing.

We’d been working on this story off-and-on – mostly off –
for the better part of three years. Anything, including a thumb wrestling tournament
on cable TV, was enough to divert our attention. We kept talking through
scenarios and occasionally even writing a couple of scenes.

Then last week I finally came to a long overdue conclusion.
It happened after I’d finished the first draft of a scene that included a
heartfelt speech by one of our favorite characters. I mean it was the kind of
declaration that would make lesser men stand up and cheer – except it had
absolutely no business in the book and made little or no sense.


It was time to cry Uncle (or Aunt, Nephew, or Cousin).
Basically it was time to hold up the white flag of surrender and say this book
is going nowhere – fast.

Was it too ambitious? Too complicated? Were we trying too
hard? Probably no to the first question; definitely yes to the second and
third. We’re capable of writing grand stories with deep themes, even if we
often choose to eschew great pronouncements of metaphysical meaning (if I even
know what that means). I don’t remember who said it, but somebody (not Paris,
Kim, or even Honey Boo-Boo), once said, “Not only do I not want to write
the Great American Novel; I don’t want to read it.”

Anyway, the two halves of Evelyn David had a brief memorial
service for a story that was dead on arrival. We killed it. No wanted posters
for the murderer are necessary. Nor even a moment of silence. Frankly, it was a

Being me, I felt a little guilt. Like I owed it to the story
to try and make it work. But maybe I’m getting older, maybe a little smarter,
maybe listening to the Southern half who doesn’t have much patience with guilt
trips helps. But I realized that by pulling the plug on a story that wasn’t
ever going to work, it freed us to write one that did.

Which is exactly what we’ve been doing.

So I guess we’re not quitters after all. How about you? Have
you ever quit a project?

Evelyn David






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